Is this a good rap for a 13 year old?

Run it once all the way through. First time I hear it I think lets do take 2. I do this for money aint askin for no loans. Hit me up across Avalon 3 bedroom homes. Aint noin special, I like to think of myself as intellectual. I love the critcism. No pain no game. That’s what drives me to the fortune and fame. Who knew my idol dint like being lied to and ran his mouth like I do. This aint a lifestyle it’s a hobby. I hope I got other things drivin for me. Writin these lyrics is makin me crazy. People call me brilliant but lazy. I dream of bein big daily. And one day I could pop in a cd that plays me.